Reviews for The Alliance
ImJustAwkward chapter 1 . 2/23/2015
I think you should let the characters gradually develop over time instead of describing them altogether in short paragraphs. But this story definitely has potential so i will fave it.
YourLastWords chapter 2 . 12/22/2014
Oooh another super hero story. Very interesting heros. Cant wait till you introduce all the villains
crypticperson019 chapter 1 . 12/22/2014
This is amazing, I love the originality of the story. The balance between the dialogue and description is perfect. And I can't wait for chapter two. Cheers!
JaguarGoddess33 chapter 1 . 12/22/2014
I like it so far. I like the variation of super powers. You have a good start.