Why Kick a Baby...?

Jokes aside, nice to see you got you're will-power back.

It's good.

Oracle! Miss me? Well when OCs are accepted, Cross comes a knockin!

I'm starting to get the idea that nearly everyone here is going to be a ass thanks to all the banks going belly up. the scary things people will go for money.

It's good.

You honestly didn't have to give me credit, I'm just happy with providing characters for authors to use. Thanks for giving me credit though.

Another good chapter I'd say.

This is definitely an interesting start, your very good at weaving an image and Hanako seems like a well made character. I'll keep reading :)

From drunks to Lords, everyone is after her body... that is fast.

I like how simple and to the point the story is, gets a idea of whats going on and who is doing it.

It's Good.

This was a very good introduction and I can see myself reading this for a long time. I have read your other works and I can honestly say that you impress me with your writing style. I will be looking forward to seeing where you go with this:)

Once again, you have left me intrigued. Expect a few OC submissions from me!

Can't wait to read more...

I see, as one man once did say.

"Take away a man’s life, books, music, and basically everything that distracts him and you
leave him with only himself and his thoughts and that
is the worst punishment you can give anyone”-The Suffering

I'll try to think of something that would fit the story.