Reviews for Almost Forever
AraxiaJustice13 chapter 4 . 12/30/2014
Oh it sounded great hehe. Can never get enough of these two c:
AraxiaJustice13 chapter 3 . 12/30/2014
Eh, my strong dislike for Ashere just diminished to a mild dislike. I love how Bekkah is just... chill. Hopefully Terry actually takes this conversation into consideration and isn't so quick to snap on Ashere now.
Wavern16 'Inactive chapter 4 . 12/29/2014
Duuuuuuuude! This is one of my fav chappies! XD Oh God, first Terry and Ashere getting along, Kieron going shopping and dressing in pink for Bekkah, and now a sexy scene! It has been a good chappie *claps loudly and cheers* Great job!
Wavern16 'Inactive chapter 3 . 12/29/2014
Damn, now I feel bad for Ashere even though I was starting to get annoyed with him earlier XD Poor guy. Now I understand it. I'd probably be really lonely too. And hopefully Kieron doesn't try to stay away again. Great work buddy!
interestinglyenough chapter 4 . 12/29/2014
Holy crap, I love how nice Terry and Ashere are to each other. See, Terry, that wasn't so hard! I love Kieron's reaction to it haha and the contacts are such a great idea, and I love that you gave some good background with why they're rare and everything. Annnd of course, it was a very sexy chapter lmao I like that Terry was perfectly fine with Kieron just being himself, too.
interestinglyenough chapter 3 . 12/29/2014
I love this chapter because it actually humanized Ashere, and he's such a great character, so I definitely appreciated that haha and I think Terry needed someone to be upfront about Ashere and Kieron's relationship, so thank goodness for Bekkah. I love her so much Lmao

I can understand why Terry is so upset that Kie is reeling himself in, but Kie is still putting in effort to be close to Terry, and that's what matters. Also, Bekkah totally sees how Kieron feels about Terry xD love that. Can't wait to see more! And I'll eventually get around to responding to your email XD I need a good 30 minutes to respond since it's not like reading where I can do that in random spurts haha
interestinglyenough chapter 2 . 12/29/2014
No, I'm running a chapter behind! That's really unusual for me lol I like that you did add that last bit that not everyone was happy with the animalistic perpetual because that added in diversity of the Etherians, plus gave Terry a chance to flaunt his powers haha

And Kieron was really sweet, of course. I wonder about that scar, though, and why it's hurting all of the sudden like that. I also like how you worked in the bond being able to sort of "control" Kieron, too.

I think, so far, even as a figurehead, Terry is doing well at this whole war thing haha I just hope Kie gets himself under control to be there with Terry for future speeches since he can definitely use his perpetual!
AraxiaJustice13 chapter 2 . 12/28/2014
Terry is so snappy now, I'm loving it haha! I hope that Kie can get better control because he is sort of important here haha. xoxo
AraxiaJustice13 chapter 1 . 12/28/2014
Kie is so affectionate right now and I love it hehe! I was so nervous about Terry's speech but he did so well. Now if only Ashere could disappear forever...
Im-all-out-of-scones chapter 2 . 12/28/2014 there could be something bad with the scar? That's scary. Poor Kieron. So much shit happens to him all of the time :(

And I sure hope Terry doesn't get power hungry. Though, I totally see where he is coming from. Kieron is a good guy. People don't have to be so harsh.

I can't wait for the next chapter! :)
Wavern16 'Inactive chapter 2 . 12/28/2014
LOL, wow, something tells me Terry is so going to take advantage of having this power in him XD I wouldn't blame him though, they really do need to get over Kieron being who he is. Great chappie buddy! I hope you feel better soon!
Wavern16 'Inactive chapter 1 . 12/28/2014
Awwww, I love how Terry is willing and able to protect him! Don't feel bad, Terry, I get nervous when speaking infront of crowds too, lol, I know we both do buddy ;) I'm sorry I didn't reply until now. We had a big family get together so we had to share a hotel room and I got no privacy, but I'm back now!
Im-all-out-of-scones chapter 1 . 12/28/2014
Okay. This is going to e a really long comment. First off, I want to say that I LOVE these guys. And I mean - LOVE. Terry and Kieron are such well-developed characters, and it amazes me. You're first book (gosh I read it so long ago), was just the starting point in this fantastic series.

I'm going to follow it through to the end, dutifully. I feel as if I have grown with these characters as well. You're a wonderful writer. And I'm very impressed with how easily you are able to make everything come together. So, now I wanted to leave a comment. I don't think I've ever left one before, and I feel sort of bad about it. This story deserves the comments. I just get so into it, I forget sometimes. I even remember when you first posted Almost Dying.

By the way, I have been through some bad times with that book. There was a little bit of me crying and throwing my phone down all in one :)

That's how you know it's good, when it can get to you like that.

So, now, onto this book. Almost Forever. I like the title. It's not bad at all. Kieron is being wonderful in every way possible - as always. I used to like Ashere...not so much anymore. I'm also really happy about Terry finally getting Kieron to come out of his shell, chapter by chapter.

I can't wait for the next chapter. And I'm sure I'll read it immediately - no matter where I am. I always do XD

Keep writing with these wonderful characters, and your amazing story. I'll be sure to follow it to the the very end.
interestinglyenough chapter 1 . 12/28/2014
Ahh, it was such a great opening chapter! You really got the nervousness and the want for Kieron to join Terry. I agree, though, definitely for the best that Kie didn't join him, at least not yet. Start slowly, then work their way up to showing Kieron.

I like that Ashere is still totally jealous haha it kinda breaks him from that "perfect perpetual" type, which humanizes him, and I like it. The further he keeps Kieron and Terry away, though, the longer this will last, so he's just hurting himself haha

While I don't think Terry's speeches are gonna go over as smoothly as this one, I'm excited to see future speeches, especially if they were in, like, a town or somewhere with more people. It's weird picturing him as the head of a war, actually, since he's nervous even just to give a speech xD hopefully he'll have more confidence in himself after all this.
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