Reviews for Dark Light
Guest chapter 12 . 2/15/2015
umm...wow...

that's broken...that is the very definition of being broken
Mistflower21 chapter 11 . 2/11/2015
I liked this chapter! It was very hopeful. Waiting for the next update :)
Acornn chapter 10 . 2/9/2015
I feel so sad right now. I am not even kidding, I nearly cried! YOU OWE ME A BOX OF KLEENEX!
But all jokes aside, haha, I really love this idea (in general) and I think it's unique. I really can't wait to see what happens next! Keep it up and update soon! :D
Guest chapter 10 . 2/9/2015
so sad...

he broke my heart...

...but if you leave me to love another...you'll regret it all someday...

oh Gawd! *ugly cries*
Elizabeth Newsom chapter 10 . 2/9/2015
I'm glad you did it from Dirg's POV. I wonder how they'll get together again. I'm looking forward to the next chapter! :)
Guest chapter 9 . 2/5/2015
shit...this made me cry...LOL

especially when he started singing :(
Elizabeth Newsom chapter 9 . 2/4/2015
Their relationship took a drastic change here; I wonder what will happen. Nice chapter! I look forward to the next one. update soon ;)
pleaseforgetthisaccountexists chapter 8 . 1/30/2015
Oh my. Gosh. It's so good! Update soon? :)
pleaseforgetthisaccountexists chapter 1 . 1/30/2015
I've read the first chapter! And I love it!
Elizabeth Newsom chapter 8 . 1/28/2015
Interesting place to leave off; it makes me wonder what will happen next. I liked this chapter. It showed the sweeter side of their relationship :) Keep writing!
Brievel chapter 8 . 1/28/2015
I like the modifications. ;) And I love how Dirg is slowly treating her more as a person and less as a thing...like...maybe...dare I say love?
Elizabeth Newsom chapter 7 . 1/26/2015
Hi RedAuthor,
Okay, please, please don't take offense at anything I'm about to say. You're a wonderful writer and I find the story very intriguing. In a way, this fanfiction makes me kind of sad, because it seems like they're relationship is so dark and... broken. And their attraction for each other is mostly external. You were vague for the most part about the dancing, so it wasn't what was said I didn't like but what was NOT said. I didn't like what was implied, how he lusts over her like this and his lust is only heightened by her sensual dancing. I think you'd find a much richer, deeper romance if there was a little more focus on their relationship. This is just my opinion. And I really, really didn't want to say anything negative, but I felt like this could help you. I'm really glad you sought me out. It's been wonderful communicating with a Christian author. I love you as my sister in Christ and I hope this hasn't somehow damaged our relationship. On that note, I want to tell you again how captivating your story is. Please don't stop writing! I will continue to read this story and encourage you as best I can as long as you're writing. And since I did this, please return the favor if you ever see anything you'd like to point out in my story. No matter what, don't let my words (or anyone's) get you down. Sorry for the criticism. I know even constructive criticism can feel discouraging. I posted this as a guest review, because I wanted to review this chapter, but I wanted you to be able to delete it. Again, you are doing an AMAZING job. Thank you for reading this.
Your Sister,
Mistflower
Brievel chapter 7 . 1/25/2015
Nooooooooo! Nooo...I don't believe you! Obi-Wan would've told me...and you made me lose your lightsaber! Who knows where it is now!

Oh and? I've nothing against using the Dark Side judiciously. Don't keep us waiting too long. *insert-threatening-face-here*
Brievel chapter 6 . 1/23/2015
...she wouldn't be beautiful if she were a Wookiee, doofus.
Brievel chapter 2 . 1/23/2015
This is a strange, convoluted, and twisted story. I like it.
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