Reviews for Remember to Breathe
Rae chan chapter 1 . 11/22/2001
That made me think of my boyfriend and I. You have a really good talent. Keep it up!
unknown drifter chapter 1 . 10/11/2001
whoa, i like it. i thought it was interesting how you said 'Staining us with its cleansing breaths', strange thought, to be staind and cleansed at the same time, but rain does that. honestly, great job.
Paradoxical Goddess chapter 1 . 6/19/2001
hmm. i think i like the imagery (damn you're so good at taht) more than the words/idea. i dunno/i'm psycho