That was awesome! You writing style is so good. Although the begging of chapters are kinds odd because they don't start off were the previous chapter ended. But otherwise its amazing

"She hugged and tried to pull his arm away from her"?
How'd they build a castle in the middle of a river?

So I'm going back and rereading your story because I love it so much. I noticed that her mom was working part time at a florist and worked dawn to dusk. Dawn to dusk is not part-time, so does she have another job? I guess it's not important to the plot, but it's something to notice.

what do you mean the first draft? Is there more?

so that means this fiction has ended? if it hasn't please update soon, it's 2016 now.

Hi there. Well I am up to chapter nine and although this story is intriguing to me, I still don't know where you are taking me. It is like a mystery that I shall have to continue reading to see where you will take me next. Great job. - Shelley

I love, love the idea and execution of this story! I'm hoping to see more of your lovely ideas come to light through more stories that you write. (Hey! It rhymes! :)

This story is awsome. I unfortunately have a fetish for girl stories(sheepish smile).

NOOO! Already finished? Just. No. :( It made my heart to split apart. I've been away from fictionpress for... I'm not sure... maybe 2-3 weeks? And that's definitely a shame! I wasn't able to follow this story like what I used to do. I blame my school for this! Seriously! It's hard being a college student you know?

And well... the story... it simply put some tears in my eyes. Kinda sounds like a jam-y drama but yeah, it does. I still can't believe it's already finished. And you know... I had a little problem on your last chapters. I'm sorry but it seems like you rushed it. Why? :( Some important (for me) details are missing. Especially the one where "the fight" happened. I think you missed the biggest point on that one.

But anyway, it's still great as it is don't worry! :P It's just that well... I think my questions will forever be buried down in the depths of my brain. xD And... just wanna say this... since I really enjoyed and loved your story, I'm looking forward to read another one. And remember this... I'll be the happiest nut in this world if you do another story! Fingers crossed to that! Goodluck and thanks a-supa' bunch for the beautiful characters and world you introduced to us! May the peanuts forever be with you! And stay away from jams! :D

- The Bestest Partner of Bread -

Just wondering, when will the next update be? I've been thoroughly enjoing this fic and have been anxiously waiting the next chapter.

I LOVED this story. I couldn't wait to finish it. It was so good I found myself staying up later than I should have to read more. I hope you come out with a quick part two. Just a few chapters saying what happens next. Like do they have kids?

I don't know what to say but, WOW! This has turned out to be sooo...beautiful! I used to read this regularly up to chapter 30 and then I had to be away from fictionpress for a while. I just can't believe this is finished. I am so glad this story has turned out to be so wonderful, but at the same time I'm a bit sad I couldn't follow this regularly. Nope, sad won't do, I'm heartbroken that I couldn't read this story regularly till the end. But its alright, I'll wait for your next story. :)
Annette and Alaric's love is simply the best. I love them both so much that I'm sure I'm gonna miss them. Nope, that won't do either; I'm gonna read it again from the beginning whenever I miss them. Thank you so much for giving us a good story to read, an enchanting world to get lost in and a beautiful love to fill the heart.

I'm so sorry for not reviewing earlier! I've been reading this story from the beginning and I should have been giving you my support! I really love this story and I love how your characters slowly change through it! It's very natural and not awkward at all! What are you going to write next?! Sorry for not having a name. I don't have an account on here. You can call me Helena :) I hope to hear more of your stories and I promise to do a better on reviewing! Great job!

61 chapters wow, it surely doesnät feel like that since I can't get enouh! I love how Anette's character has turned out during this story! Can't wait for another update!

Just finished reading this chapter again, all I can say is WOW what a great story. Looking forward for another beautiful story from you.