|Reviews for Castle in the Sky|
| 360pages chapter 2 . 9/26/2015
Hmm, more back story of the world and how it functions. Which is good for a second chapter, lets people ease into that sort of thing.
| 360pages chapter 1 . 1/8/2015
Hmm, this somewhat reminds me of another series, actually somewhat even reminds you of some of your other work. A princess leaving her kingdom among other thing. The chapter is a little short to get handle on the characters so far.
I do wonder what you are going to do with the 'real world' aspect of everything. The mini Prologue was somewhat nice though. Though some of the Exposition was a little clunky which is understandable considering you do have to explain things.