|Reviews for Panic Attack|
| co-creating metamorphosis chapter 1 . 1/11/2015
I wanted to start by thanking you for the loving review... thank you!
I love the image you start off with her - "an ache deep in my back". I found some of the rhyming in this piece to be a little forced, such as "I twist and scratch until my nails turn red and crack" and "the self guarding dams snap...useless make the map". Be careful of typos too! :) Overall, I really felt the emotions you were portraying, which was wonderful. You really painting a genuine and truthful picture.