Reviews for Closing Time
zagato chapter 1 . 1/30/2019
I hope she got home safe, thanks!
Redache chapter 1 . 4/21/2015
A girl that can fight back! Maybe you could explain better why he desires her pain so. Did her family do something to his? Is he just a psychotic serial killer? Does he have a reputation? If he did, she might have heard his name before and know of him. This is an amazing story, otherwise. I love how she fought back, and your description of his actions was phenomenal.
NovemberRose1 chapter 1 . 1/12/2015
Ok, so don't yell at me for bursting your bubble, but wouldn't it have been a whole lot easier to just call the police since they were so close? She had a phone she could use. Just a thought. Terrifying story. Makes me wonder about him. Again, you need to continue this one, or add just enough to let us know who he is, and why he is following Arianna.