|Reviews for The Tale of Charming and Princess Ella|
| I-am-a-Firefly chapter 1 . 6/17/2012
Nice. It has that fairytale feel to it.
But I wish it was more detailed.
My sister is named Rianna!
| struck chapter 1 . 11/1/2008
that's pretty interesting...
good, but a bit boring and also you just have Rianna living happily ever after but you don't say if she does that being a slave and a wife and if that's for us to decide I don't like it that well
good but predictable if you've read Cinderella or variations
| Alena D'Etoiles chapter 1 . 5/24/2006
eek, that's long, but i put it on my fav. list so i can come back and finish it later.
| GramerFreekz chapter 1 . 5/29/2004
The last paragraph was a nice tough! Luv It!
| Silver Lily22 chapter 1 . 3/24/2004
Wow! This is a great retelling of Cinderella! I love it! Now, if you'll excuse me, I have to go see if you've written anything else!
| Aster chapter 1 . 11/5/2003
That was very good!
| Ikoilla the Admirer chapter 1 . 1/10/2002
| Starborne Chyck chapter 1 . 6/21/2001
That was a cool story, nice twist with the mask instead of the shoe!
| Secret Squirrel chapter 1 . 6/20/2001
Style: 4. Content: 3. Grammer: 4. Some words do not really fit. Make sure to identify all your charicters in some way when they are introduced. The dragon-saving might need a little work. Maybe the dragon needed his tail free to swish when he worked his magic? Other than that, it was a fun, goofy little story.
| sarah chapter 1 . 6/20/2001
coolio! good twist on da story!
| Daughter of the Stars chapter 1 . 6/19/2001
It's remarkably similar to the book Ella Enchanted because it has the two main characters, Ella and Prince Charmont except Ella is a princess and Char is a slave. You even have someone to play as Dame Olga! BUT IT'S A GUY! which means that you twisted everything around! very impressive! keep it up! I'll look for your writing... )