|Reviews for Blind fire|
| Nessa Jean chapter 1 . 1/13/2015
Like the previous reviewer, I think this is solid work. I too like curdled eye and the scribing riddles bit is nice as well. I quibble on 'pocked' and 'nocturnal plights' - the former because I think there could be a less obvious descriptor, and the latter because it feels a bit forced for the rhyme, but I'm nitpicking. Nicely done.
| theCoffeeEnzyme chapter 1 . 1/13/2015
Good quality. I like the simple approach to a topic some could get lost trying to write about. "Curdled eye" to describe the moon is also great. Keep writing.