|Reviews for Eterna's Source|
| moskatero chapter 1 . 1/23/2015
A very good and intriguing start for a new series.
Dark and gritty is no easy to pull of but I'm amazed at the different overall tone you managed to convey as opposed to fantasia.
Can't wait for the next chapter
| Ava Bell chapter 1 . 1/23/2015
It's finally here! Plus it is way better than I imagined it would be.
The part where the tower collapsed was cool. It's neat to think that her power can cause someone to lose control of their spells. Shows how powerful she is in her own way.
I am looking forward to learning more about Veltyen. Especially his own magic and history.
Can't wait for the next chapter! :)
| Lazerkat chapter 1 . 1/22/2015
THIS IS FANTASTIC! I'm am saying this from the deepest, darkest part of my heart; if you stop this story, I will get very sad. Your writing style, knowledge of how to actually write diolouge properly and awesome plot/story/idea/characters is just...yeah I'm done now :P
I will be waiting!