Excellent chapter! I'm on my iPad so sorry if there are typos heh. Anyway, poor Dalton! Not only does he have to deal with his feelings for Seth on his own but now Lilith did something to him. I hope Seth can help him! Update soon! Ps go karting is awesome ;)

Yay! Update!

great chapter i loved it!

I'm really enjoying this story. I look froward to updates.

I like this chapter :3 It seems like Seth and Dalton have a bit of an understanding now, which is great, and of course I'm still loving all of the characters. Curious as to what Cain wanted, though - it can't be good. Too bad Seth won't tell Dalton what he said xD The mystery is rising and I'm loving it. I hope you update soon because I'm beyond curious to see what happens next!

Well it's not letting me sign in for some reason, so... yeahhh xD Anyway.

I really liked this chapter! The dinner between everyone was awkward and yet intriguing, and Cain and Lilith both amuse me and irritate me, but in a good way, I promise. I'm just as curious about Seth and Seth's mom as Dalton is. Sorry this is short, lol. Anyway, thanks for posting and I do hope you update soon as I'm looking forward to learning more about Seth :)

Aww I like this chapter :3 Seth is still very intriguing. I like it when he lets his guard down but he reminds me of Kieron when he is all standoffish so I love him then too xD I like Dalton's anxiety over everything; I would be anxious too if this all started randomly happening to me out of the blue, at such a fragile time in my life. Thanks for the chapter, and I hope to see more very soon! And don't worry about the length of the chapters - long chapters are fine :3

Hmm I actually really liked this chapter. There was a bit of action, and their argument seemed realistic to me. They are both on edge - Seth has to get used to being in human form for the duration, while also being dragged to classes and everything with someone who is moody and someone he has to try to keep at a distance even though they are right next to each other, and Dalton is still dealing with all this new info on top of his mom's death. They are both in difficult positions right now. I do love Mikhail though :3 I'm looking forward to their dinner date with him, I wanna learn more about him and Seth and everything. And I love Seth all the more :3 Please update soon!

That whole bit with Paul, Lonnie (which makes me think of the kid Lonnie in one of my old stories lol) Seth and Dalton was great. I could feel his embarrassment. Everyone hates being put on the spot like that but at least Seth took charge like a pro. Also, I feel bad for Dalton; he's trying to get to know his guardian and Seth isn't having any of it. Although I can understand, of course; Seth is doing his job. It's not good to be emotionally tied to your job because if something happens... well, that wouldn't be very fun. Anyway, lovely chapter as always and I'm still really loving Seth! Please update soon!

Wow this is AMAZING! You should finish it and get it published. That's how good it is! I'd definitely read it. BTW I love Seth too!

Ohh please keep writing this!
I really love how you put a song at the start of each chapter too :3

Fantastic start.

lol I like Seth a lot, he's interesting and entertaining :3 a spider, hehe. Now Dalton's gonna be worried about every little animal or bug he sees and think it's a demon after his body ;)

Dalty, you should have chosen the sex energy deal... lol gahh at least Seth will be nice to your soul when you die so that's good :3

Update soon, please! This was a great chapter and I am eager to read more about these two!

wow this is really good. a bit gloomy but overall i enjoyed and thats the main reason we write, to entertain people and tell our story. plus a bit of gloom never hurt anybody. as someone once said "its the damaged that are dangerous, they know how to survive."

oh and please check out my story i just started. im just trying to practice for when i write a novel to publish.

This first chapter started the story of strong and makes me anticipate what will happen next.