Reviews for Rune
Amberflame805 chapter 3 . 1/26/2015
I love how Kiryl calls him doll.
Hmmm I wonder what a shade is and what they can do. And this Tamos seems interesting.
Glitch is an odd name, but I think it's cool that you added in a lesbian relationship.
I also like how you introduced a lot of characters before we meet them
Update! I want to know what happens to Loki!
Amberflame805 chapter 2 . 1/24/2015
Commentary
"'Having your soul ripped from your body...being forced back in time into an older version of yourself...it hurts everytime and they do nothing but make us do it again if we fail.'"
Hmm good explaining sentence... Makes me wonder who they is
"'Having your soul ripped from your body...being forced back in time into an older version of yourself...it hurts everytime and they do nothing but make us do it again if we fail.'"
Now I really want to know who THEY are... They must be really powerful
"He was not in control of the situation like he normally would be"
I wonder how many times he's done this
"Mecha"
Is that who they is?
"The longer he tried to keep eye contact with the other, the more vivid the image of his mangle corpse became. The bloody ground and shredded clothes, the light slowly leaving his eyes."
So he can see different ways things can happen? That's pretty cool
Review:
That must suck having to relive your closest die so many times.
Update!
Amberflame805 chapter 1 . 1/24/2015
This was very well written. I like your writing style, good details but not to slow either.