Reviews for Bad Blood |
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![]() ![]() ![]() Great chapter :) |
![]() ![]() ![]() Yay! It's always such a lovely surprise when I see there's more of this story. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Hey I love your story! I just wondering if you got a beta or soneone to check your work? A few sentences dont make sense coz of certain words of where you placed them. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Such a beautiful chapter! Cant wait for the next update :) |
![]() ![]() ![]() this was epic! but please, for the love of all that is soft and soothing, update soooooon! |
![]() ![]() ![]() This is seriously the best. I just love the storyline, magic and wolves and the characters are all really well developed and likable and they all have different sides to them. And it's so well written, with such a compelling backstory. I really like Levi and Amelie's relationship, it's a bit strained at time's and they don't really understand each other right now but they have some really adorable moments and I can't wait for it to naturally progress. |
![]() ![]() ![]() I really like how Amelie's characterization is coming along. I like how she's still cautious about her entire situation, how she doesn't take anything for granted. Likewise I like how her magic is explained and that now she has a character who can potentially help her with her magic. It's great to see a character who doesn't fall into the 'safety trap', so to speak. It's also nice to see that Levi's character is very consistent, that he's not all of a sudden her best friend, her true love. He doesn't do the 180 that some people feel necessary to implement in their character. His attitude with his prisoners is welcome, he's the Alpha, the leader, so it's nice to see that he can be cold and cruel in order to protect his pack. His support for Amelie was a good development in their relationship in this chapter, but it seems they have a little more work to do on their trust. Not that I was expecting it to develop immediately or anything, but Levi probably will need that smack in the face sooner or later. He needs to learn to accept not only Amelie, but her heritage. And that's all for now I guess? |
![]() ![]() I like this seth guy. I love your story. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Really good story ) |
![]() ![]() Well that answers the age questions. The bookshelf thing was really hot lol, but it ended really soon. Update soon |
![]() ![]() A little curious about Levi's age, and the other characters besides Amelie (19?) |
![]() ![]() Wait so is there going to be some sort of love triangle here? Does Rohan like her too? :o I wouldnt mind lol |
![]() ![]() Can't wait for the next update! This story is so awesome |
![]() ![]() BRILLIANT. I LOVE IT AND I LOVE YOUR IMAGINATION (; |
![]() ![]() ![]() I just discovered a new fav werewolf story (: And who needs physics homework when you could be writing instead lol jk But the chemistry between Amelie and levy is just intoxicating, well written |