|Reviews for From the Heavens (Fish and Chips 1)|
| James chapter 1 . 4/26/2016
I was directed here from Youtube.
After reading the first chapter of "From The Heavens" I must say it is quite good. I like the characterisation of the characters and their multi-dimensional and humanistic aspect but I feel the narrative is somewhat lost. I feel that with some further development of the Novella's themes and by weaving them into the fabric, subconsciously, of your Novella, it would read more fluently and coherent. Anyway, I found it to be different (which is good) keep up the good work!
Oriel College, University of Oxford.
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| demando chapter 1 . 2/12/2015
Clearly an interesting story. Will continue reading, and see how the plot develops.
Happy writing and update soon.