Reviews for Tyrant |
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our-embossed-sky chapter 2 . 2/19/2015 Nice, but chapters are too short...needs to be longer if you intend to have it published. ;) update soon! |
jr78 chapter 1 . 2/11/2015 Well I wasn't sure what was happening here, and the dialogue was kind of mashed together confusingly with the rest of the text. The revelations of this chapter were very vague, and not much can be inferred or discovered. Through these few lines, the plot seems very chaotic and unstructured. -Poopllama |
our-embossed-sky chapter 1 . 2/11/2015 Oohh, scary! With the two men in black suits and all...*shiver* lovely, lovely story, very nice intro chapter that really grabbed my attention. And I assume you meant 'Elizabeth'? or is that just a very unique name? ;))) |