Reviews for My Lovely Monster
Tosha Goff chapter 1 . 3/29/2015
So far this seems like an interesting story. Kinda reminds me of when I went to a chicken fight, so I can relate to Luz's reactions from when she first went in to seeing the battle won. Not that I condone those kinds of fights, but that's what I thought of first when that scene happened. As far as I can see, there is no errors except for the last paragraph. You'd called Luz, Liz. Other than that I don't see anything wrong with this chapter! Good job, I really like it so far. :)