Reviews for Memories
MeLovesZoeyy chapter 1 . 7/15/2015
Woah,I really like this chapter,its very interesting!
And I have to admit,great!
CherryAngel991 chapter 11 . 6/9/2015
Oh my goodness... I'm crying right now. Tears are literally running down my face.
CherryAngel991 chapter 3 . 6/9/2015
Awwwww
CherryAngel991 chapter 1 . 6/9/2015
I like this already!
damnphool39 chapter 12 . 3/29/2015
End... nooooooooo. This is going to sound weird, but to me, this story was cozy. It was a nice slice of life, with those character-developing elements and that cute romance aspect. Even though it was sad, it was a cozy and comfortable read. Thank you for writing this :)
Marina x Machina chapter 12 . 3/28/2015
WHAT?
WHAT?
WHAT?
...
Whyyyyyyy? Poor, poor poor main character! Why is he saying his life is ruled by women? What? B-but...so you're telling me he not only was blind, he lost his parents, his first love died and left him this stupid notebook with a few sentences of her writing, and Aurora read it and was like "Welp, better break his heart and leave him this TROLOLOL?"
I feel so sorry for this guy! That's cruel! I don't like you anymore, Aurora! Is she gonna fall down from the sky next winter or something?
...
Zàijiàn!
-Raven
Marina x Machina chapter 11 . 3/28/2015
Wait what?
What?
She had family?
Then why did she fall out of the sky and decide to stay with him and what was she recovering from and why is Main Character not going "HELLO? INSECURE BLIND GUY HERE? WHAT FAMILY? WHY ARE YOU BREAKING UP WITH ME BEFORE WE CAN GET TOGETHER? YOU'RE TELLING ME YOU HAVE A FAMILY NOW? Well, I don't need a girlfriend nananananaaa! COME BACK HERE NOW! DID I MENTION I'M A HELPLESS BLIND MUTE GUY?"
Overall your writing style is really good and stuff but I get confused a lot with this story. I liked Aurora's character and you are good at writing about surviving the cold winter, but I'm confused when new events occur. I'm anxious to read the next chapter!
Zàijiàn!
-Raven
Marina x Machina chapter 10 . 3/28/2015
Yay...more fluff...
Zàijiàn!
-Raven
Marina x Machina chapter 9 . 3/28/2015
Wait what? I'm confused. The paper sounds a bit like he's transcribing his thoughts exactly, which is a little weird. It'd be kind of like receiving a letter from an English person transcribing their stereotyped accent, such as "'Ello, mate, I'm British an' I come from Englan', what 'bout you?" (/) (-Clearly has no friends with British accents). It's also very cheesy, and I don't expect for him to talk about the kiss. I think he'd probably just write "There was a girl named Lynne who had red hair and looked like you who came over to stay with me after my parents died and I was still recovering. She decided to start a garden and taught me how to use hunter weapons. But she died in a fire, and I really need you to stay here."
Zàijiàn!
-Raven
Marina x Machina chapter 8 . 3/28/2015
Huh? Wait, what promise and how does he instantly know what's up?
Zàijiàn!
-Raven
WafflesandUnicorn chapter 12 . 3/24/2015
Why do I get the strange feeling that he is going to commit suicide...
Marina x Machina chapter 7 . 3/11/2015
Yup, fluff alright. Fluff coming out of my ears and pillows.
Zàijiàn!
-Raven
Marina x Machina chapter 6 . 3/11/2015
Aurora is beginning to remind me of Stargirl. I regard the book like you see HG, but her aura and personality kind of remind me of the main character,who supposedly has even saved peoples' lives and inspired teenage girls.
Zàijiàn!
-Raven
Marina x Machina chapter 5 . 3/4/2015
Ah, the pronoun game. Yay.
-Raven
Marina x Machina chapter 4 . 3/4/2015
Hm. I liked the detail and realism of the drought.
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