Reviews for Going Home
Death Spire chapter 1 . 4/10/2015
This poem was amazing... I really don't know what else to say.
FictionFox'95 chapter 1 . 2/26/2015
This is some amazingly powerful work. I like how you personified the thoughts and reasons to live as he/she tries to "run" through life. At the end, however, it did have me a bit confused. From the "rise rise rise" part, I think that means whoever this is about got their confidence to carry on and sounds like they open up when you wrote "Mom... mom, I'm home." Or does it mean they actually took their life? Overall, probably one of the best poems I've read.
Bob Story Builder chapter 1 . 2/25/2015
You have a hand for poetry. Don't stop. I enjoy reading your poems. This one is, provocative.