|Reviews for Dead Land|
| Axolotl33 chapter 14 . 6/23/2015
I probably shouldn't have read fourteen chapters in a row...
I loved how all of the characters were interconnected.
One thing: "you're" should be changed to "your" when it's possessive. Other than that, this is amazing!
| Kiddie Squiggles chapter 10 . 6/1/2015
Another interesting set of chapters. This set was a little weirder and darker than the rest, and a little confusing, but nonetheless interesting. As usual, I found multiple misspelled words and other grammatical issues, some of which did take away from the overall experience of reading it. Other than the editing, keep up the good work
| Kiddie Squiggles chapter 7 . 4/24/2015
Another great set of chapters. The grammar was looking much better around the beginning of the set, but in this last one you missed a few more words/misspelled more words than usual. Either way, I'm looking forward to reading the rest of the story. Keep up the good work!
| Kiddie Squiggles chapter 4 . 4/18/2015
This is looking really good thus far. You could do with some more thorough editing, as I found that you missed several words or misspelled some as well, which made it somewhat harder to read. Other than that, I'm looking forward to more.
| KaomixRobyn13 chapter 3 . 3/5/2015
Another good chapter! I like the deputy, I hope he shows up more. He just seems interesting.
| KaomixRobyn13 chapter 2 . 3/4/2015
I really like this story! Its surprisingly hard to find a good western but I really think this ones going places :)
Hope you write more soon, dying to read it!