|Reviews for The Journey|
| cardiff1984 chapter 1 . 3/17/2015
Maybe this was Toby's punishment for portraying himself as a selfish and heartless person. The only person Toby thinks of, is himself and maybe Katherine possibly his negative fantasy, wants him to see, what it's like to be hurt.
| ShakerBoxBandit chapter 1 . 3/12/2015
I like how she turned out to be orchestrating everything at the end, I'm left wondering why he didn't feel sorry. Maybe he's just a dick, but for the story I'm not really sure they 'why' matters anyway. I think the dialogue could probably use some attention, it seems a little forced and, to me, over done in areas, especially towards the very beginning and end. It reminds me of something else I saw recently where a guy thought he was talking to the devil and it turned out to be god, that had been adapted to a little one-shot comic book type thingy; I think this too really lends itself to some kind of graphic format if you have any interest in illustration.