Reviews for The Journey
cardiff1984 chapter 1 . 3/17/2015
Maybe this was Toby's punishment for portraying himself as a selfish and heartless person. The only person Toby thinks of, is himself and maybe Katherine possibly his negative fantasy, wants him to see, what it's like to be hurt.

Loved it!
ShakerBoxBandit chapter 1 . 3/12/2015
I like how she turned out to be orchestrating everything at the end, I'm left wondering why he didn't feel sorry. Maybe he's just a dick, but for the story I'm not really sure they 'why' matters anyway. I think the dialogue could probably use some attention, it seems a little forced and, to me, over done in areas, especially towards the very beginning and end. It reminds me of something else I saw recently where a guy thought he was talking to the devil and it turned out to be god, that had been adapted to a little one-shot comic book type thingy; I think this too really lends itself to some kind of graphic format if you have any interest in illustration.