|Reviews for Changing Times|
| wanderer chapter 1 . 3/10/2015
That was beautiful.
| PoetOfSaiMiHunManKal chapter 1 . 3/11/2015
I understand a lot of what you mean here. I too have gone through times where things seemed hopeless and despair was my only thought.
As for the poem itself, I like how most of your lines except for your 4th and last ones had around 9 syllables. The lines that didn't served as wham lines that darkened/brightened the mood. Your use of repetition was also great as it conveyed a feeling of hopelessness. I also like how in the final 4 lines you create a more positive atmosphere. Seems to show that you're beginning to regain hope.