Reviews for Just a maid |
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![]() ![]() My new, favorite story. The pacing in this is well done and thought out :) |
![]() ![]() ![]() The dialogue up until they kiss is a bit awkward, the kind of awkward that happens when the author is impatient and is trying to plot a line to the juicy bits, which are very well written outside of a few sentence hiccups in plotflow. However, sex scenes are not allowed on FP. |