Reviews for Brighter Tomorrow: Kaoru
Frigligated chapter 2 . 2/18/2017
Noticed one typo "My father gris" but that's all I saw on my first read. Sooooo glad to see this being continued and looking forward to seeing more.

Did you change some of the stats/weapons on the two suits Kaoru could pick? I could have swore there were some differences from the original versions but I was too lazy to check. I could have sworn the suit she had had a blade her father said could cut through anything and I remember us making a crack about that later when that failed to be true.
Rhythri chapter 1 . 3/15/2015
This was a really good introduction and I'm definitely interested in learning more about Kaoru. Nice world building! The tech described all seems so cool-looking forward to an update!