I love this story already! Please update!

Its cute but Dustin have girlfriend right?
Funny another apple xD

cant wait 4 the next chapter... :))))
bet something will happen...please update real soon! :D

Plz write more! :D It'd be awss!

Aww... indeed! I always think that male pov of romance story is really interesting. So far this is cute. I'm looking forward to reading your next update! :)

Ooh I like this so far :)

Great start. Absolutely you should continue.

I would suggest a divider between his thoughts and hers.

Also, with her thoughts you switch back and forth between "her" and "me". If the "me" is her thoughts, which I assume it is, you might want to distinguish that in some way.

I look forward to reading more.