|Reviews for Brittle Petals|
| Mars Z. Pan chapter 8 . 7/13/2015
Interesting premise- I love the idea of flower motifs for each character. Wonder what the queen's getting out of this...
Your descriptions are nice, but I feel like there's too much at times. You could give more development to the characters instead; maybe a deeper insight into their thought processes. Even some backstory relating to each illness.
| Chiisutofupuru chapter 4 . 5/14/2015
Not sure why a sheriff would trust a (notorious) thief on a whim but okay...
Between all of the characters that were introduced and all of the talking in this chapter I lost my focus and started to get a little too confused, lost track of who was who.
| J.A. Cadelina chapter 1 . 4/9/2015
Looks interesting! Please update!