|Reviews for An Elk in the City|
| LDF chapter 1 . 5/15/2015
["That I am," answered the man dressed in a suit.]
Answered is not the same as replied. You mean the latter.
["Call me Cherry Bomb," the woman smiled back at him.]
Smiled isn't a speech tag.
This is a nice story with really great ideas. I applaud a protagonist who isn't a total dick and really cares about the wellbeing of prostitutes, who are generally loathed and treated poorly in these kinds of stories. Though I have a question: if he's got the resources to locate pimps and madams who abuse their workers, why doesn't he set this as his first priority?
| FictionFox'95 chapter 1 . 3/28/2015
That's a pretty cool concept for a storyline. At first, it reminded me of Lethal Weapon when Mel Gibson's character got bored, he hired a prostitute for the sole reason to watch cartoons and Three Stooges with him.