Reviews for Prophecy of the Starnik
Sheriff chapter 12 . 12/18/2016
Awwwww
Shur-ruff chapter 11 . 12/5/2016
Nice work man!
Sheriff chapter 10 . 11/7/2016
Pretty good man, your getting better and better at it! See? Was that so hard? Lol
Interviewer chapter 8 . 10/8/2016
I like the improvements on this one, again, doesn't look like you need to fix much in this chapter, just straighten out some grammar and you'll be hunky dory
Interviewer chapter 7 . 10/8/2016
Awwww, little Rosie would cuddle with Scott to keep him warm, cute hehe. Don't think there's much to fix in this one man, nice work!
Inter.view chapter 6 . 10/8/2016
Starting to want to copy and paste the name lol. Still seeing some slight problems with narration and pronoun choice but otherwise it's pretty good. Lol
Interviewer chapter 5 . 10/8/2016
Would've wrote snarky interviewer but not enough characters. Anyway...awwww Rosie is so tiny and puppy like!
The Interviewer chapter 4 . 10/8/2016
Some dialogue that could use some sprucing up but otherwise I like it
Interviewer chapter 3 . 10/8/2016
Have some touch ups you could do but I like it, more realistic than it was last time
The interviewer chapter 2 . 10/8/2016
I like the redid portions on this man, scene transitions look good on this one!
TheDashC chapter 8 . 11/20/2015
Oh Crap I had no idea that you'd updated this!
Well, I'm looking forward to any chapters you post. I'm obviously a big fan of the original story and this new version is much improved so far.
I can't wait to see how you rewrite some of the other characters.
Anyways, keep up the great work. I'll certainly be keeping an eye out for new chapters.
-C
Sheriff chapter 7 . 8/26/2015
Can't wait for the next chapter dude!
Sheriff chapter 6 . 8/26/2015
Reminds me of an old married couple
Sheriff chapter 5 . 8/26/2015
Great chapter dude!
Sheriff chapter 4 . 8/26/2015
Hahaha
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