Reviews for Angel Scar
KChanDreams chapter 9 . 12/11/2015
Asphalt,

To be honest, when this was written I was just learning that names weren't all English and I found Japanese names interesting so I mixed them together. I rather mix names from different cultures then stick with one culture since the names wouldn't sound to generic...I guess I really should start editing this story since this was written when I was in elementary school...way too long and my grammar wasn't that good yet. As for the poorly drawn part, I was watching old fashion anime at the time, so that might be the reason. Thanks for pointing it out though. I'll try to fix this in the future. _

-KChanDreams
Asphalt chapter 9 . 12/11/2015
What's up with all the Japanese and English names? It's sort of weird. Also your characters remind me of poorly-drawn animu characters and if they were an illustration, they'd be filled in with Roseart colored pencils and have large blobby features.
ElvenValar chapter 1 . 4/10/2015
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