i like this chapter also. your concept of wonderland is cool. i wonder how you're going to expand upon that.

i like the prose here. this is very good.

Another excellent chapter, and as always, beautifully written. I am pleased you have started writing your AliceHatter story; I have much-awaited what would become of your magnificent ideas. :)

Absolutely love the prologue to your new story, Hayley! I can't wait to read more. It flows immaculately. :)