[Seventeen-year-old Anastasia has always wanted to kiss eighteen-year-old Ryker. She's imagined being with him for so long, but that's behind her now. Or is it? "Ryker and I's relationship, or lack-of one, is interesting but not really. "I've wanted to kiss him since the day I saw him." I'm horrible with summaries, oops. I really don't know and this summary is a train wreck on ice.]

I know you're aware your summary could use improvement, so I hope you don't mind some pointers.

Summaries are difficult to write, so don't feel discouraged if you can't get it right the first few times. What you can try to avoid is stating the fact that your summary is horrible. Not only does it take up the word count, but it gives the impression to readers that the story will be horrible as well.

Remember that the summary is supposed to tell the reader what the story's about. Talk about the plot. Make sure you're engaged to discuss it as well. It's also a bit of a downer to read 'Ryker and I's relationship, or lack-of one, is interesting but not really.' First, I suggest 'Our relationship' as opposed to 'Ryker and I's relationship' as the latter sounds awkward. Second, don't mention that the relationship between these two characters is really nothing special. It again enforces the fact that this story shouldn't be read.