I love short things that tell a story in one go. This was perfect. You're becoming one of my favorite authors.

Great story! I love it!

I really love this, and I love the whole music thing and the fact that it takes place in a club. Instant fave!

I saw that you wrote a new story and I decided to check it out. It's short, sweet and to the point. Great imagery and I loved this. I think this is my favorite thing that you've written.

I loved the idea behind this! You should post more one shots! I'd definitely read them!

Awesome story!

This was short and sweet. What a great little piece.

This is lovely! Are you going to make it an actual story or are you going to leave it a one shot? It works well either way.

Such a cool idea! I love this!

I really liked this, especially the ending. It was awesome! Keep up the great work!

I love this. Its really interesting and I definitely hope you write more stories like it.

This was short, sweet and surprisingly deep. I went into it not really knowing what to expect but the ending pleasantly surprised. I loved this little story you've written. Awesome job!