Since it's rather late for me, I'll keep my review brief. I liked it. I thought the story was rather cute and the misunderstanding absolutely perfect. I'm not sure if it's just a case of slightly different versions of English, but I spotted a few typing errors throughout the story. Not many though, which is a sign of your hard work and care for the story. To be honest, I actually wouldn't mind it if there were another quick story between them to highlight the change in dynamic between the two characters when they start dating, and even a prequel of how they interacted before this change in their relationship. If you ever typed up either, I'd be delighted to read them through.

Anyways, I'll end my review here for now. Thank you for the read and I hope you are doing wonderful in your life. Stay inspired.

Wish it was a longer story because I enjoyed it a lot... Great story...

Seriously a good one-shot! I know how hard it is to write, much less make something great out of a few words. I've read a lot, and I can sincerely say your writing style is great! It effectively captures people's attention. I love the chemistry between the two characters, which you've established pretty well given the form! And I also love the blatant sexual references. Oh you, wanting us to feel like we have dirty minds! Lmao!

I'm really hoping you'd write another story be it another one-shot or a multi-chapter!
Cheers!

I loved the ending!

My mind is pretty dirty now... whoa, I don't feel innocent any more...

Anyway, great twist!

This was soooooo funny! I'm glad I made it through. It was long but awesome. Can't wait for the next one :D
I couldn't find any mistakes, so that's why the review is so short. Again, it was great.
Don't worry about not having very many reviews - I have hardly any either.
Cheers, Toto

Wow.
I have to say, my dirty mind really got the best of me XD
I love this one-shot, you can make it into a story, I'm sure a lot of people would like it!

I made it to the end

XD oh my god... the scenes with the snake... I think I died.
I really liked how you wrote this, though I do think that Cole and Avery's relationship progressed a little too fast. Other than that, it was pretty good! :)
Keep writing!

-Snowflake

Ten thumbs up! (Well, I don't have ten thumbs exactly but if I had then I would raise ten but then again- You get me?)

Oh my goodness, you little sneak. You made me think of something else (that wasn't exactly the most innocent thing in the world)! I was all smiles and jaw drops the whole way and I won't simply settle that this be a one-shot! *shoots canons* This story is very well-written and there are no mistakes too! I can't imagine why you wouldn't turn this in a novel! You're a great writer and you have a great plot which will make a very light and enjoyable good story! Avery and Cole have great chemistry. Explosive, may I add. So I suggest that you continue because I'll really really really really really really (and a hundred more really's) love it if you updated or turned this in a novel! Splendid job! Please do keep on writing! I support you all the way and your other awesome friend too! :)

Please update soon! Much love!