Reviews for Emergency
Redache chapter 1 . 4/20/2015
Is this present or past tense? Why were they on their feet? Isn't standard procedure to cower under the most available object? (I say that because I have a friend who lived during the Cold War who told me that her school would go through drills where they hid under their desks) I am guessing this is a coastal city? Or have other cities been bombed already? Very good description of the fear and crowd and great ending.