Reviews for Sonnet of lovers
RacyAngelCressida chapter 1 . 6/3/2015
A shout out. Yes women can produce breast milk even if they are a virgin. It has to do with a hormonal imbalance. Thor did not fantasize that. He remembered while he was at work. That really happened.
Kiya chapter 1 . 4/22/2015
Not terrible but a little underdeveloped. I liked the whole idea of him just fantasizing on his break and everything but I almost missed that part because of how anticlimactic it was. Also women don't have breast milk unless they have recently given birth or they are breastfeeding a baby so its impossible for her to have breast milk and also be a virgin considering you need to have sex to get pregnant. Other than that discrepancy its a good overall idea but it still comes off as sort of choppy and unrealistic. Hope this helped :-)