Reviews for Love is Lust
atalantea chapter 1 . 6/10/2015
The persona felt really angry and disillusioned for me towards the end

For me, it felt a little too straightforward for a poem. I like poems that sometimes make me draw my own conclusions, or that lead me to think that "Ahh, yes, love is the same as lust." I think maybe, this could be one of those.

Keep writing. :)
ImmanenceEnsured chapter 1 . 5/28/2015
Love and lust:) I think there is a VERY significant difference, but I firmly believe they exist separately from one another. I think, as long as there is too much lust, which is an egotistical feeling, there is no room for true love.
deadaccount42990492 chapter 1 . 4/29/2015
the beginning is so good, but I feel like your last two lines lose the feel of the poem. I absolutely love the rest, but I wish your ending was a little bit more in touch with the rest of the mood. Really good though, I love the message!