|Reviews for A Single Spark|
| The reader chapter 1 . 1/21
I know this has been a long time since publication, but please update this!
I really like Alexandra. You did a good job of me hating the king. It makes her motivation more believable.
| HestiaAbnegation11 chapter 1 . 5/5/2015
Okay! First off, to the first reviewer (Sorry user) you shouldn't just STOP reading because there is ONE tiny mistake. It matters almost little to nothing. But to user, I loved the chapter and can't wait to read on! Update soon!
| Wendy Thompson135th chapter 1 . 5/3/2015
In the first 4 paragraphs you miss punctuate all the dialogue tag sentences and omit commas around interjections. I gave up after that.