Reviews for CR: Damnation Canyon (Failed Labyrinth June 2015)
Solemn Coyote chapter 1 . 5/17/2015
Little bit Fallout, little bit Dresden Files, little bit Dogs in the Vineyard. This is tasty. The hook is great, the characters are interesting, and my only real critique is the end. This piece doesn't wrap up. It unfurls motivations and setting details in the last few seconds that don't have a chance to mean anything to the reader. I'd suggest expanding this a bit-if not into a novella, then at least into a pilot episode for a longer season. There's more than enough material here to work with, and it's got a lot of rough charm.
Jun Aoi chapter 1 . 5/6/2015
Oh snap! I love the ending.