|Reviews for One Had to Die|
| ambethiiii chapter 1 . 4/23
Your story deserves a lot of audience, you can publish it on NovelStar Mobile App.
| Cowboy-4-Christ chapter 2 . 9/13/2016
That was a cool story. You must have put a lot of thinking into it.
| charles-smythe chapter 2 . 3/1/2016
the 2 men who faced each other...both would have removed the 'THONGS' from the hammers of their pistols BEFORE confronting each other...
| RaisingDad chapter 2 . 1/27/2016
On Sirius satellite radio, I like to listen to those old radio programs from the 40s and 50s, such as The Jack Benny Show. One of my favorites is a western called Gunsmoke. This story would have made an excellent episode for that program.
| RaisingDad chapter 1 . 1/27/2016
"flap my yap"
Quite possible the funniest three words I've ever read. I can't say why it tickles me so much, but it does.
| LorrahBear chapter 2 . 1/7/2016
This was phenominal, and certainly deserves to stand on its own. You did such a splendid job. I could see and feel everything.
| LorrahBear chapter 1 . 1/7/2016
You could (and really should) remove this authors note chapter and combine it with the actual chapter itself. Let the words speak for themselves.
| BradytheJust chapter 2 . 12/13/2015
Brother vs Brother is always interesting to read and you pulled the suspense of a western showdown off perfectly, I could feel the emotion of both Tom and Jim as they faced each other down.
Great job and I look forward to reading your other works.