Reviews for Love Thy Vampiress
Kenshin Kojima chapter 6 . 9/2/2018
Still a little lost with the story. But I am curious to know which Vampiress is after Junichi. And this secret meeting happening. I am guessing I need to refresh my memory of this story, lol. Still I am curious to see what happens next.

Oh, Dr Doe delivery boy got some real guts. Seriously... It was pretty badass how he kept his cool like that.

Thanks for the read, as always!
JaDeCe chapter 2 . 4/22/2018
Cello ? Conductor ? Flute ? Who next? Percussion ?

Lol. Hi its been a minute, but im finally free to get back to reading. This one is nice, but all of your stories are. Our main cast is interesting. I enjoyed sitting in class and learning about the different types of darkness. I learned a lot just got aggravated when my classmate kept flirting with the teacher.

I wasnt expecting the two being eaten so suddenly. It had me on the edge. I hope the teachers can beat the lower mau because i am assuming they were being called for that.

Anyway. Good chapter. Ch 3 i go
lirianstar chapter 2 . 3/27/2018
Saito makes me feel like -_- and she actually puts up with that?

So there are six types of darkness...
Makes me curious about the 'overlord'.
lirianstar chapter 1 . 3/27/2018
I'm really digging the concept here.

Blood bonds? Blood warriors? Powers which is supplied by a strange vampiric bond, which is present...yet isn't at the same time.

I'm into the mystery of his history!

Will be reading on~
Kenshin Kojima chapter 5 . 3/25/2018
It's good to see you have not given up on this story. It took me a while to remember where the story left off and its characters. Still, this was a good chapter. I cannot wait to see where this goes. It had the right amount of action and emotion. Seriously, I hope both Ellen and Keigo don't die. I also believed Saito was set up. Again, I cannot wait to see where this goes.

Saito's monologue? Well, it all depends if you think its needed or not. Honestly, I would left it for the readers to figure out or reveal in later chapters.

Thanks for the read, as always!
Kenshin Kojima chapter 4 . 7/2/2017
It's cool to see that you're continuing this story. It has been a while since I read the last chapter, so I had a bit of trouble remembering the story so far. But once I started reading this, it came back to me.

I dunno the reason - but this chapter reminds me of the anime, Chivalry of the False Knight. I guess it was because of the tournament and Kotaro's determination to succeed, even though he does not have a Vampiress. I don't know if this is what you were aiming for - but that's the impression I got.

Overall, this was another good chapter. I felt like I got better understanding of the Blood Bond. I also got a better understanding of Kotaro and the reason for him not having a Vampiress at the moment. I see Saito is still being a douche. Dr. Kurokira is still a pervert, I see, lol. Seriously, how does he still have a job? Is he really a doctor?

I wonder who will be the lucky vampiress to pair up with Kotaro. Also, I feel there's more to this new transfer student than he's letting on. Well, I guess I'll have to wait until the next chapter for these answers...

Thanks for the read as always!
rolphy556 chapter 3 . 11/4/2016
I like this one, its a good story arch and it can go so many different places.
When will you be updating it?
Darth Zannacross chapter 3 . 6/9/2016
Well that's one extreme gym class all right, Yuga sounds like the drill instructor from hell. I would say it is so extreme that it seems bloody but I guess Vampires can laugh that off lol.

And now, Vampire Chat-rooms, gives be vibes of Durarara! I suppose, we will see. Well, we see more of Kotaro's feelings when he vents, it seems this Luckiest Vamp knows how to play him, seems ok for now.

Well, Vampire Budokai eh? Don't alert the Belmont clan or they might crash it, but I doubt it will happen. So, we will see where that goes.
Darth Zannacross chapter 2 . 6/8/2016
As the title said, a rather meaty lecture on Darkness. Well, I also see Vampire's like porn as well, in this reality at least. And, Atem would not be happy that Yami is the least ranked darkness, though hell, Yami Malik and Yami Bakura might start playing shadow games in this school to get that changed lol.

I wonder what rank Heartless and Hollows would be, oh well. Well, the bad guys seem interesting so, we will see where the Judgment Orchestra goes from here.
Darth Zannacross chapter 1 . 6/6/2016
Another vampire story, but since there are no sparkles here should be fine.

Akria seems cool enough to start. We got some foreboding dreams with Kotaro, and we got our group, who is not quite tight I guess, the norms of Vampires can be tricky I suppose.

Well, we will see what bonds evolve through here.
hazelnutbrew chapter 1 . 4/10/2016
Hello, thank you for the wonderful review on Liberi Fatali! I saw this piece advertised in the RAOSCR forums, and decided to check it out. I've got a good impression of it thus far, the characters are interesting and likeable. The setup and worldbuilding is very interesting, and I liked the fight scene at the beginning. It's interesting that the protagonist doesn't have a Vampiress that he bonded with, which led to a one-sided match between Saito and Nora. I wonder what the bond exactly entails when it comes to having a Vampiress as your partner, but the concept is very cool and I love how you executed it. I think that you have the beginnings of a potentially good story here. Nora is also a sweetheart, though it's interesting that there's conflict between Kotaro and Saito, and there was the backstory with the girl he saw a manifestation of his inner conscience and how he won't give up on her. It was well done, and I liked it. I certainly hope to see more from you, and maybe I should get started reading more Soul Anomaly as well. That's another good series that I don't want to miss out on.
TheRaven'sFeather chapter 1 . 3/28/2016
This looks very intriguing so far. You've set up all the characters quite well, and I'm interested to know more about the school. It took a bit of getting used to to see the action words bolded, but it was an interesting style choice.
Kenshin Kojima chapter 3 . 3/26/2016
Yeah, I was surprised to see you posted another chapter for this story. So, the academy has one of those teachers, huh? I thought it was awesome how Kotaro came to the rescue of Yamamoto. Still, Yuga does have a point. A battlefield is a cruel and harsh place. Pampering Yamamoto might do more harm than good. But Kotaro did offer to help him train. So, it might work out in the end.

Now we have a perverted school doctor... It was a funny scene. I almost died when the doctor said he wasn't into beastality and accused Kotaro of being into it. LOL!

I see something sinister is about to happen. I am curious to see what happens next with that.

I am guessing that Nora is 'Luckiest Vampire'? She's really concern about him. She also loves him. Don't try to deny it. I know she has strong feelings for him. But Kotaro is so determined on saving Sara that he can't see it.

Overall, it was good to see you're keeping up with the story. It was a good chapter. I got see how kind Kotaro is. But it also might prove to be his downfall. Still, it was cool to see him make a new friend. I hope this friendship becomes a good one.

Thanks for the read, as always!

PS: I love the cover! Another awesome magna-style cover.
DevilPogoStick chapter 2 . 1/26/2016
I think this is a neat chapter, to get to know more of Kotaro and his school life. The action that follows gives way for a potential plot which is a nice touch.

I don't know, Kotaro is a decent character but sometimes he puts me off as to how much of a dick he can be. He has a sorta flirty dialogue with the teacher in which he knows all the guys hate him for but he does it and while Saito is an ass, did he really need to keep trying revenge on something Saito said and Nora also mentions is a good point? Nevertheless, characters like him do grow on ya.

Keep it up!
DevilPogoStick chapter 1 . 1/21/2016
Well, I thought this is a neat start for a story. We got two characters who have their own set of issues and tensions do seem to linger when those issues come to light.

Kotaro lost someone special to him but refuses to let her go, even if it meant not gaining any sort of power than what he has, which proves to be a problem as he lost his battle. He's kind of dick but Saito was just being brutally honest to Kotaro. However, this girl that Kotaro once had a bond with is something he can't just discard and it makes you sympathize a bit for him despite his own flaws.

While Keisuke struggles with the fact he never has a bond to a vampiress despite how it could help him in the long run but he seems to have no intentions to do so. It's rather interesting of a situation he's in when he's refusing something that is a norm to the others.

All in all, good job on the start. Keep it up!
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