|Reviews for salvation|
| Written In Red chapter 1 . 6/21/2015
I like the last line especially. It's a great picture and play on words smashed into one line. I think making this poem a little longer would be beneficial. It's well written but I think it only gives me a snapshot of the full situation. I'd find it interesting to know more then get hit with that final line. In my opinion, it'd make the poem as a whole more impacting!