Oh man, what does this mean?! Hmmm?! Well, answer me woman! XD Short but awesome chappie! I have so many questions on this! Who's Nyx's parents and what is he hiding under that beanie, and who was that Thomas guy?! Get to writing it!

Ooooooooooooh! I like that we have more info on Daniel. I'm intrigued to find out what it is he's a double agent for. The plans for Max also sound intriguing. I wonder if this applies to yousaying the story really begins when he's 20. hmmmmm.

i think it sounds intriguing. I definitely want to know what happens next and I honestly don't feel like I can trust Daniel.

Awwww, so cute at the ending! I can't tell if I like Daniel or not, but I love Max and Nyx! They're awesome! And poor Maxie, that's gotta be rough. But anyway, I can tell this story is going to be interesting! I can't wait to hear some philosophical stuff! Hope you like your book! XD

Ahh, so good to see it on here! This is such a fun project, and I'm so happy to be working on it with you :3