Reviews for Regeneration
Marina x Machina chapter 5 . 5/25/2015
Not the time...
Yeah...
Coolio, so does that make Spaniard bisexual?
-Raven
Marina x Machina chapter 4 . 5/25/2015
Wow. Spaniard just took down a zombie with his prosthetic leg.
I'm impressed.
But I still hate the guy.
-Raven
Marina x Machina chapter 3 . 5/25/2015
Weird. Did all the lab rats die from eating rotten flesh?
This was also interesting, I never would be able to come up with a world like this. I'd imagine the Spaniard to say the word in...Spanish? I also think mayeb the rating could be T, but I dunno.
-Raven
Marina x Machina chapter 2 . 5/25/2015
Poor Raven, she probably died. Ah well, I was getting fond of her.
Hm...if you said something like Spaniard guy was crawling at incredible speeds it'd make more sense because really a fresh amputation...yeah. I liked it so far and the characters are good, except maybe explain how Spaniard gets around, if he walked on his amputated leg I can't imagine it working too well.
-Raven
Marina x Machina chapter 1 . 5/25/2015
Oh my gosh.
Based on your talking I did NOT expect your writing to be like this.
It's not an idea that I'd do, but it's bloody great. I loved the part about the avocados for some reason and the dialogue was fairly natural and the ending is out of the blue.
-Raven