Reviews for The Djinns of Yohannez
Needless chapter 2 . 5/25/2015
You need to proofread more. You made numerous grammatical errors, particularly, missing commas.
Needless chapter 1 . 5/24/2015
I, for one, like this prologue. I don't think you need to capitalize the word "cave'", though.
ElvenValar chapter 1 . 5/23/2015
nice job