|Reviews for A Place To Belong|
| wordtooler chapter 2 . 4/25/2003
cool... write more soon? it's great so far but there is barely any information on the faeries except that they can't stand humans. :)
| Jedi Jenna chapter 2 . 7/3/2001
Nice. I like it so far El. Write more! (Ha, I know you have free time so don't give me any excuses! Amni still has the other book you're writing, so you don't have anything better to do!)
| DarkClaw2k chapter 2 . 6/24/2001
| Secret Squirrel chapter 1 . 6/22/2001
This is pretty short. It is sort of a character intro from which a story would start. There is too much telling and not enough showing. Telling is saying that the person is a half-farie for instance. Showing is building up a scence with a few other one-shot scene characters who interact with the protagonist and convey all these ideas through their interaction. Needs more description.
| Nakato Rune chapter 1 . 6/21/2001
Hmm. I can't really think of anything to say about just this... maybe once you get some more up people can get a better idea of it.