|Reviews for Ashes|
| Jack Bellows chapter 1 . 6/19/2015
I envision a scenery where it flickers between a bruised woman in the past and present. One is tied to a chair in her living room by a man and the other one is in the same chair sitting around her burned down living room.
Basically, She gets beat on by the guy and watches him destroy the living room until he burns it down. - tee-hee
| Bob Story Builder chapter 1 . 6/10/2015
I felt so sad reading this poem. The third stanza is heartbreakingly true. Persona find love I hope.