Reviews for Polluted Skyes
zanybellecloudo chapter 3 . 7/13/2015
Hey this was an interesting chapter I liked Molli she seems very cool and dangerous. I'm trying to understand Skye and what type of demon he is. It's a great concept about the different worlds and type of era which I'm intrigued to find out more. Keep posting your chapters soon! Thanks for sharing ZB.
LorrahBear chapter 3 . 7/2/2015
Interesting start of a story! It's probably me missing something, but I didn't initially catch that he was a demon (part demon?).

Nevertheless, I enjoyed this quite a bit. I hope to see more!
Guest chapter 3 . 6/30/2015
There are probably lots of people reading this, they just don't like leaving comments :D

This story is a bit confusing, but still exciting. I am sure that the confusion will clear up as we get more chapters. Oh and a A/N reminding us about the extended ch2 in ch3 would be good - I will forget otherwise :P
zanybellecloudo chapter 2 . 6/27/2015
Skye is an interesting character with suicidal tendencies yet a willing to live. As there's no description I'm not sure where this story is heading but it's damn exciting so far! I'd watch the flow of third person to first person, which was stronger in the prologue. But I struggle with that myself! I'm interested to read more so keep it going! ZB
Guest chapter 1 . 5/29/2015
This is intriguing. You should definitely continue this. Longer chapters would be nice but I am guessing this is just the prologue :)
Jack Bellows chapter 1 . 5/29/2015
Thank you for the review! I just don't have people in my life that enjoy reading so it means a lot to me. (I will be updating frequently.)

In the early stages, I wanted to name my character "Shad" but I felt the name "Skye" was more fitting and changed it last minute. (Even gave me a chance to twist the title... Fun right?)
Icarus Effect chapter 1 . 5/29/2015
I like the "action prologue". It leaves just the right amount of suspense. I also love the idea of a floating world and demons on the ground.

I spotted a few punctuation errors, and I have a question : the hero is named Skye, right ? Who is Shad ?