Reviews for You Think Too Much
Bob Story Builder chapter 1 . 3/1/2016
I read this while listening to Frozen's Let It Go so matched I think. I disagree to a point with line "Romance is over romanticized." I think individually people are romantic healthily, and it is the media that has romance over romanticized. I don't think society impersonates life but rather reflect life and has a symbiotic relationship with life. Example, people are into eating healthy, and society gets all over labeling food as 'organic' and what not. And you made me look up the word 'semantics.'

Besides a few points of contention I had, I thought this was a provocative poem. Also the last two lines of the second stanza I disagree. I think if you work you can expect results you worked for but this is a more of meta-narrative poem than individual nitpicky.
EWindheim chapter 1 . 12/22/2015
I love your juxtoposition (I probably spelled that wrong) of terms and they way you argue semantics in this. Very well done.

I have officially reviewed all of your work. I need more stuff to read now :P