Reviews for On your heart?
The Okay Writer chapter 1 . 4/20/2016
I'm liking this poem, but I think you should say /If your heart is broken, let me mend it./ or something.
I'm not a poet though haha! What is on your heart? Very cool poem!
Dreamarcher chapter 1 . 4/10/2016
Interesting poem which has two halves. The first seems to address feelings in a spiritual way and the second in a technical way. Seems sort of the heart vs the mind or science. It seems to have a duality to it. Is there a way to join the two together?
CorkyBookworm1 chapter 1 . 3/8/2016
Huh, this is an interesting approach to the question. I actually quite liked the chemical aspect. It contrasts the scientific and formulaic with the abstractness of human emotion. And I must say it rings true of a best friend to ask such a question. The first half of the poem felt very comforting in that it reminded me of a true best friend's words and intentions. Very lovely!
EWindheim chapter 1 . 1/8/2016
This starts off really sweet and heartflet, but I got a bit tripped up on the chemical names and stuff. I felt it broke away from the feeling and rhythm of the beginning of the poem, but that's just me. Overall, a really nice poem.
drowning in ice chapter 1 . 7/17/2015
What a beautiful musing. I especially loved the ending.
iwillbedauntless chapter 1 . 6/8/2015
Wow, this is beautiful. I love it!